Did it turn ugly or something?

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I moved it because I stupidly talked about my real life & while it wasn't a big deal, I was uncomfortable with having it out in the open. I regretted saying anything at all to be honest so, I hid it...because I could.

I can't hold it back anymore. Duchess, you always put your comma after the words but and so and that is wrong.

Use a comma + a little conjunction (and, but, for, nor, yet, or, so) to connect two independent clauses, as in "He hit the ball well, but he ran toward third base."

I was raised by wolves, they did the best they could.

He hit the ball well but, he ran towards third base. There! I've got it!

(10-29-2010, 08:54 PM)Duchess Wrote:

He hit the ball well but, he ran towards third base. There! I've got it!

You stop doing that! Right now!

The conjunction is implied. It is a literary style. I swear.

(10-29-2010, 08:05 PM)Duchess Wrote:

I moved it because I stupidly talked about my real life & while it wasn't a big deal, I was uncomfortable with having it out in the open. I regretted saying anything at all to be honest so, I hid it...because I could.

You showed some soup, chicken.

(10-29-2010, 09:20 PM)sally Wrote:

(10-29-2010, 08:54 PM)Duchess Wrote:

He hit the ball well but, he ran towards third base. There! I've got it!

You stop doing that! Right now!

Now that you mention it, I think I do that too. I never thought about being raised by wolves, but I must have been. That explains a lot.

(10-29-2010, 09:53 PM)username Wrote: You showed some soup, chicken.

He hit it from the back ,then he puked.